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So Close, Yet So Far Away by ~pem30:iconpem30:



Wanting something
And yet, you can’t have it
Being tempted by its very being
But no matter how much you run, it’s always out of grasp

As you get closer
It seems to get that farther
Always out of reach
But you won’t give up

Your will waning
And you seem father then before
Reaching hands
Heart filled with desperation

But this cruel world laughs
Your attempt futile
No matter how close you get
You seemed to be pushed that far away

You lose the battle
Your will dies
Everything and anything that you had once held close
Slips away

That being that temped you, seems so little now
You lost everything and anything because
You only saw that thing that was so close
And yet, so very far away…
©2008-2009 ~pem30
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Author's Comments

truthfully i think ever since i first started writing, i wasnt very good in the beggining (my spelling still sucks now) and i think i have gotten slightly better... i wrote this umm... 5 to 7 months ago. i havent posted it cause of reasons. i hope u like it. plz leave comments if possible.

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:iconorez720:
hehe, you cant spell:) You sure can write though:nod: and thats all that matters;P

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Ill try and be all you wanted...
:iconmg9990:
aw. amazing hun <3 to be honest it was so beautiful i cried (and no im not being sarcastic. but i think some of that is from all this wadded up energy of not reading anything you wrote in so long ^^;) i love it. why are you so amazing?

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"Take my hand.... ill be everything... to you....
Take my hand! Ill take everything from you!"

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:icontembo-box58:
hmm... i think your spelling is good. but then again i can't spell pretty. i used to spell it preatty...

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